week8 another cut edition fixed and color test

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color test

I feel like the current version color in the character flashback feel a bit unreasonable
so I do the color test if the other color scheme might make it better? 


new cut fix 

I got recent feedback, so I move some short around, longer dissolve and cut off some part

1. still not sure if I should add the hanging part, I like it since it is a strong but then I don't feel much different with the tone when I remove it? or should I change from his lover to father?

2. many viewers with non-background about LGBT seems to not understand the whole story and even watching it more than once they still don't get it.... so I was thinking if I should add that one shot of his mother handing him a football and cut it off in the director cut version?
since when the animation screening in the theater, the viewers, and other teachers who only be able to watch it only once so I want to be clear even they don't get the story but at least get what the point is

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